Again

Again

 

It’s a point to change something

A point to do it differently

But it falls

It breaks

 

You promise to stay strong

To hold on just a little longer

But it falls

It breaks

 

This time you are serious

It’s never going to happen again

But it falls

It breaks

 

You are lost

Struggling to resurface

You fall

You break

 

And then,

It happens again

Reviews

[Nina Devine]

I like this so much! Especially how "it falls/ it breaks" changes to "you fall/ you break"

[Bethany_Savy]

I like the repetition that you used at the end of each stanza. This pretty much explains the constant struggle of life.

[Tiffany]

Ooooooooooo :) Fancy Shmancy!!