In a Night

Little girl what happened to you?

You are not the same girl I thought I knew.

What's going on in your mind?

Tell me the secrets you left behind.

He said "You're so stupid! You always lie!

Hey little girl? I hope you die."

Those simple words pushed her off the edge,

by morning sun, she'll be dead

This little girl goes to lock the door,

before she knew it, she was on the floor.

She got up, wiped away her tears.

Said to herself, "Time to get over my fears"

She grabbed the razors from her draw

something she has done before.

She runs in her closet, slamming the door shut.

She cries and shouts and begins to cut.

Nobody is home to stop her,

and everthing she remembers is a blur.

Waking up the mornig next,

to find a cut upon her neck.

She sees her body lying in a pool of blood,

the closet door being overflood.

She has killed the monster deep inside,

and with relief, she lets out a sigh.

She was free.

Reviews

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'She has killed the monster deep inside, ..... She was free.'

She killed the monster inside her; she paid that price again~

Important poem. pat

[Taylor Ann]

The poem flowed very well, it seemed to roll off my tongue as I read it. As did one tear down my cheek towards the end. The poem was beautiful. I really enjoyed it.

[Tai Ryens]

I got confused about halfway, some due to your phrasing, others due to your many typos. You have talent, you simply have to hone your skills. I suggest starting with reading over this and correcting it all, then going forward to write another poem, then so on.