My Deep

A short poem about a man's thoughts, secrets and regrets.

My Deep!

It is a part of who i am

A lost gem of who i was

and a treasure to find for who i will become

my best and worst are hid in it

my slumber and rise do begin indeed

My Deep!

how often i slip into

sharing my life in two

to one a body and another a soul

whispering to them in parts of a whole

i am lost in a world so bold

stolen from the earth i ought to be

My Deep!

my entire life is built up in it

the foundation of my being and spirit

the summary of my life is this

my deep my deep commune yet with me still....

Reviews

[Cassie]

Really nice.
I like how you construct your writing very good.
I really love your poem hope to read more from you soon.

[DiaryKay]

Thank you Cassie!! I am encouraged and I do count on your criticism and applauds as we both strive to express our thoughts in writings!!

[Cassie]

You are welcome