Wishes for our Mother

In my mind, this would be appropriate for a greeting card with art/drawings.

   Roses upon your cheeks, sparkles in your eyes,

   Thoughts of days gone by,

   Promises of days to come,

   Good health, love from family and friends.

   These are our wishes, for now and forever.    

   Happy Mother’s Day!

Author's Note

Would it be suitable for a greeting card?

Reviews

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

This is wonderful, it would be suitable as such. I guess you want to write -friends- at the fourth line. Well written.

[Tate Morgan]

Oh I imagine she loved this what woman wouldnt

[Diane Lockard]

Thank you, I haven't been on the Cafe as much, but hope to be back on a regular schedule soon. I am happy that you stopped by....

[zainul]

Thanks for the efforts.
It is suitable for this moment.
However,you may love to rhyme it later.

[Chris]

Line four... "Frtends"?

Very suitable... and thoughtful.

[Diane Lockard]

I enjoy talking to people on Cafe, time goes by so fast, so my thought is Live Your Dreams... I will return later. Diane