SURPRISE

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

SURPRISE!

You thought you could always

walk all over me.

SURPRISE!

Now you see how strong your

abuse has made me.

SURPRISE!

You have yourself standing in

a mess way past your knees.

SURPRISE!

Before I am through

that mess will be all over you.

SURPRISE!

My messes you claim you

always have to clean up,

have now become messes

made only by you.

SURPRISE!

I have NO intent to

clean up after you!

SURPRISE!

SUFFER IN IT!

You deserve every bit of it!

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

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CJ	Damn, you sound pist. I love passionate rage its so pure. best way to release that energy is writing. Posted 16 Years Ago Damn, you sound pist. I love passionate rage its so pure. best way to release that energy is writing. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

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