It's COLD Dark and Damp

It's COLD Dark and Damp

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
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Imagining a JAIL CELL

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It's Cold Dark and Damp,

they don't even allow you

a lamp.

 

It's Cold Dark and Damp,

it's so small, there is

no need for a map.

 

It's Cold Dark and Damp,

nothing grows there,

not one plant.

 

It's Cold Dark and Damp,

you'll wish you had a

SECOND CHANCE.

 

BUT I AM COLD, DARK

amd EMOTIONLESS, giving you a

SECOND CHANCE, would prove to

be valueless!

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


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This is good. I like the way you put this whole thing in motion. Keep up the good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


OH I feel the Chill...and it a very uncomfortable chill too. Good one!

Posted 16 Years Ago



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DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

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