LOOSING IT

LOOSING IT

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
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A Tribute to my weight lose and entry into the Inspired by Lyric Contest ~ Lyric selection "Look how pretty she is,"

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Loosing it
feels so good.

 

All 50 pounds
I thought I would
never loose.
 
 
Loosing it
feels so good.

 

Now shopping
for form fitting designs,
not loose baggy duds
to help me hide.

 

Loosing it
feels so good.

 

Self confidence and complements
are not my only rewards.

 

Loosing it
feels so good.

 

 

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


Author's Note

DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
Entry in to the Inspired by Lyric Contest with the lyric "Look how pretty she is,"

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Good luck in the contest. This is a cute writing. Did you really lose 50 pounds? That's great! Your picture is beautiful too. I am glad to see you write about something pleasent in your life. You deserve it!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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