THIS IS WHO I AM

THIS IS WHO I AM

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

This is who I am.

It is true,

you where there

to help me begin.

 

With no choice as a child,

the game had to be played,

by only your rules.

Which ment, the secrets

kept for years and

your goals always met.

 

But this is who I am

and your influence I have

brought to an end.

 

I am better than that!

I don't care if the whole

world hears about my past.

 

This is who I am!

You can't blame me

if revealing my past disturbs

those I once called family.

 

I am only sorry

you can't be as proud

of who I am.

Because it just helps

others to understand my

past, when they see how

you cruely react.

 

This is who I am!

I am proud of who I am,

and what my past has made of me!

 

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


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I love and admire who you are!

Posted 16 Years Ago


this weirdly reminds me of an edith piaf song I love.
its beautiful and so powerful and booming ful of emotion.
It would make an incredible song.
I adore it really.
great work love.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

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