Similarities

Similarities

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

We spent all week

comparing  our similarities.

 

It's amazing the number

of similarities. Some we would like

to ignore, but many we are proud

to have explored.

 

Then I look at our children

and I see the same.

 

We both have beautiful girls,

a Princess and one

in training. Not dressed

in party dresses, but swinging

rackets in their Nike Dresses

or galloping along the trails

on their favorite horses.

 

 

Our boys almost

from the same mold.

Both so athletic and

most likely engineers

in training. Wanting to be just

like Dad, with golf bags, and even racket

and fishing poles in hands.

 

The similarities are

way too many.

 

The week was

full of great memories,

our children will now have.

Memories of true loving family,

they will always have

and will always cherish.

 

It was the Best Vacation

we have ever had!

 

August 2008

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


Author's Note

DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
No this is not my sister...this is a long lost cousin. We are both Motherless, and found each other in a point of our lives that we both needed each other. Neither of us were raised with a sister, so we are finally learning what TRUE SISTERHOOD is all about. Unfortunately...I am the OLDER SISTER! LOL

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This reminds me of when I was a kid...
Such warm thoughts while reading this
wonderful piece.

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a beautiful treasure that you will have through the years. Very enjoyable to hear and I can tell it meant so much to you to have such tender memories.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Nice! I am happy you all had a great vacation! Hearing about a great family experience in the 21st century is always great! Lol. Good job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Oh truly beautiful. It made me think of some of my childhood vacations with my family. Wonderful flow, excellent imagery.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow, you just made tears come to my eyes, what a beautiful one you got here, I enjoyed it so much and can't wait to share with everyone. Hugs to You!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


What a beautiful piece. Is this about your Sister? I haven't seen mine in about 6 years.

Posted 16 Years Ago


A most delightful poem to read this evening ... Beautifully penned ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago



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