MISS YOU What Else Am I To Do?

MISS YOU What Else Am I To Do?

A Poem by DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

TWENTY-FOUR hours without you.

What I am I suppose to do?

 

I broke out in sweats,

my heart didn't rest.

 

Our relationhip has grown

day after day, to me

we had a scheduled routine.

 

Imagine twenty-four hours without you,

what else was I to do?

 

I made my phone calls,

to my local PD.

Now they are back on their

2 hour routine,

watching my house making sure

my online predator is not seen

preying in person on my children and me.

 

Twenty-four hours, tell me

Do really think I missed you?

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2008 DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson


Author's Note

DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
Do you like the sarcasim at the end? Actually it was very peaceful the first 24 hours of peace in 139 days.

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but I read also sadness in this. sarcasm is a way how to deal with sadness, isn't it.... a way.. I thought, how such a life might be.. when PD would watch my house.. or would one raise into the situation of their watching? well done !

Posted 16 Years Ago



I found you I can't wait to start reading and hope to get encouraged to start writing my own healing poetry. Thanks for caring and for the beautiful bracelet I'll charish it.

mia

Posted 16 Years Ago


Lol. So sarcastic.

Tell me, how are things going?

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Wow intense write here hope all is ok.

Michelle

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson
DiamondNRough AKA Patty Rase Hopson

It's GOD's job to judge Predators, It's the Survivor's job To arrange the Meeting.



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