Durge of the Elements

This is a snipit of a short story im currently working on.

I awoke, sweating profusely, as anyone would after such a nightmare. Still drawn in, the dream continued even as I sat up.

     "Fires from heaven, burning fleash...." There a child before him. Laughing and glowing, if u could call it that, almost black. Beside her the old man steps forward to meet me continuing his poem. " A man whom shall soon be put to the test" His eyes revealed the truth of his words, the past clear in one, the future clouded in the other. "Of Fire Earth Water and Wind, mark my words you will herald the end" It was then that both eyes became one picture, the past and future one and the same.

     As my vision returned to me the Earth trembled. Yet again I would be needing a new alarm clock I realized as I appraised the small pile of parts on the floor. All my life the Earthquakes have followed me. As have the dreams.

Reviews

[Paladin4life]

Hey bro I never noticed that you posted this section before. You have done well. The included poem is great and this short section does a wonderful job of hooking you in. I look forward to reading more of this story man. Take care bro!

[jay]

verry good. i would like to see what this leads to in the future