Intentions

Some of my work

your intention are publish

hide in your demolish emotions

selfish you want everyone portion

desert skin without lotion

tears like waterfalls when there no option

parade in paradise with parasites

ants on my face without a bite

toast your glass when chairs slide

compare your pain when flowers died

million march for water in toxic lakes

swimming with alligators during my lunch break

pray on icebergs holding a candle for god sake

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I’m getting the overall feeling of an exceptionally bad day or person of whom you don’t particularly like LOL
I like your parade line the most! I would enjoy hearing this in the music

[Diabolicalbeard]

Lol ur right it could mean anything in that field i would love to work with singers to come up with a track for it

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Mmmm goodness this is clever I read it three times liked it so different made me think !!!

[Diabolicalbeard]

I am glad you like it it means alot to me.i love poetry that makes u think

[Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)]

Yes me too