My First Love

this poetry written by #dhaneshwardutt in this poetry poet want show the situation of lover after breakup

O my first love, 
you came not remember 
'm incomplete without you I 
shall not be persecuted me 
get your remember when 
I breaks out in 
many tears come 
, but someone tells it to 
now come in anxious 
do you not wake me up 
O my first love 
you I remember it came 
saw when I thee 
you had  little shy 
you have inside your heart 
was hidden so that 
when I promise to hear 
came across your eyes 
to see me 
speak my house Till 
now, with the help of your memories, 
you don't make me cry, 
O my first love, 
you don't remember me
Remember me that every moment 
was spent with you, 
I am looking for your home 
that you have shown me 
no I love you understand 
that you just mine 
without you in this life 
is dark everywhere 
thy sake I have so much 
pain it has suffered 
some wrong The 
heart is very lonely. 
Now, stay away from me 
, do not burn this heart. 
O my first love, 
you do not remember me 

Author's Note

please ignore my mistakes and my grammer

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

"Without you in my life, it's dark everywhere"--that's what I relate most with a breakup. There is never a "good time" to decide to end a relationship with another, but sometimes, it's for the best...some two people are never meant to be together. I know I've picked a few suspicious partners which concerned my parents, but now I am on my down and building myself from the ground up. It takes time to feel alright again without the presence of another...but one day, you will be comfortable with being in your own company again.