Time

Time

A Poem by DhaVerd

For all those who feel alone, for all those who give a groan.

It's time to speak up and use our tone.

I loan you my strength and hope you keep faith.

We aren't alone. Let your wounds be sewn.

It's time to stop with our moans, ‘tis time to show how we've grown.

Use the strength held in your bones, show that you're tough, tough as a stone.

For this is your home and the walls shall never fall.

The time to bawl is over and now we must brawl.

 

© 2014 DhaVerd


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The poem has a great message, but I think that structuring it into paragraphs makes it easier for the reader to keep up with the given sentences and gives more room to think about.
I especially liked "For this is your home and the walls shall never fall."
Keep on!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2014
Last Updated on April 16, 2014
Tags: Alone, depression, strength, home, kingdom, power, power within

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DhaVerd
DhaVerd

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I am a nerd, gamer, larper, and a big comic book fan. I love to write especially of my feelings or just a story that I find fascinating. I don't really have much friends, but that doesn't get too down.. more..

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