I Can't Stand You Anymore

I can't stand the ground you walk on.
I can't stand the way you look.
I can't stand the stuff you say to me, it's like you're reading it out of a book.
I can't stand the way you talk.
I can't stand the way you walk.
I can't stand the way you look at me and barely even talk.
I can't stand the way I love you.
I can't stand the things you do,but most of all,what I really can't stand is being here with you.

Reviews

[McEltic]

Sort of gets right to the point, without any misunderstandings :) love it

[I don't know]

Short, simple, and sweet.
I actually love it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. They are needed sometimes. I liked the honest tone and the use of repetition. Thank you for sharing your worthwhile words and thoughts.
Coyote