Our Fresh Start

We’ve talked and reconnected

Discovered not a lot has changed

Through the ups and downs

The sudden stops and the rapid speed

We survived

As we modified and perfected us

We gave our selves a new beginning

An unbreakable future

Now we can truly use the definition of “forever”

That’s what fresh starts can do

They heal and re-secure

Our bond that’s unbreakable

It’s stronger than a tree

Better than an angels heart

With this love we share

Not even God himself can rip us apart

Reviews

[barleygirl]

This is well written with an honest feel & good intentions all over the place, but I simply think this message is totally delusional. I know everyone wants to think about or talk about or write about "forever" but this just sounds so freakin' unrealistic. The fact that your declaration of "forever" is stated in a few different ways, plus you're even going so far as challenging GOD . . . this makes your message sound like it's been written by a 12-year-old. I don't necessarily think this all points to bad writing in any way at all. I know many people would buy into such a crock. But some of us know how life really goes, which makes it hard to get fully behind a message like this. It's definitely thought-provoking.