Precious Gift

An expression of giving your heart to someone in the awake of first love.

Your beauty is flawless,
Your Heart is Pure,
Your eyes shine like emeralds
And they will see our love through.
You're the girl I dreamt about
Since I was a kid
And an absolute Gemstone.

I don’t have much money, jewellery to offer
But one thing you should know.
What I gave you is something
Priceless,
My most precious Gift,
Money can’t buy,
And the only treasure inscribed with
Your name.

That is my Heart,
Which grew to love you
For who you are.
Being Grateful for every moment we spend,
And cherishing each of them dearly,
For in our souls they shine
Brighter than Gold
And prevail longer than eternity!
Don’t ever forget that.

Author's Note

Whats your take

Reviews

[Lethu]

This is as pure as it gets. Lovely piece indeed.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

It is not what you have to offer in the way of material goods, but in the way of love, caring, devotion and emotion...that is what this piece says to me. You have allowed your heart to spill onto the page with this one, and really, that is where all poetry begins--a coring of the heart and then fitting it back together for others to read. I felt this one.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Sarah,you intepreted it very well,im glad you liked it.

[Stella Armour]

a beautiful love poem for your lady.... much enjoyed..

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Stella for reading,hope you had a great Bidthday :)

[Stella Armour]

i did thank you...:o)

[NA]

I think this is really beautiful...a wonderful read :) x

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Raven

[ayosonolowo]

A splendid write, which express your real feeling....

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you for reading

[Lydia Shutter]

Such honest romantic feelings...straight from the heart. Very lovely. Lydi**

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lydii for your lovely comment

[Prritiy]

a beautiful love poem showing your pure feelings.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Prritiy for reading

[Prritiy]

you are welcome.

[Cassie]

Very beautiful poem which I enjoyed reading

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you :)

[Clara]

A very sweet and heartfelt poem.
You convey your feelings well.
Good write, Nko. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lola :)

[SyberRose]

Beautifully penned with deep emotions from the heart...Rose

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Rose :)