A blissful relation

Sharing a blissful relationship with someone you deeply love is one of life's greatest joys.

We savour the bliss

A divine spark of love

Interlacing our hearts

Like a magical beanstalk

Blossoming to the heavens

Where ecstasy abounds

Raptured are we

In clouds of warm embrace

Desire seranades

'Tween me and you

Starlit moonshines

Our pathway to Venus

A bright future

All we see

What could go wrong?

We wonder

For a blisful relation

We share.

Reviews

[Jack...]

Very, very nice my friend. This was beuaitufl poetry at its best.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Jack :)

[Cassie]

thank you for sharing, I enjoyed reading

[Nkosana B Masuku]

You're welcome :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Our pathway to Venus
A bright future -- really liked these lines.

This was certainly a "sublime" piece in terms of texture and imagery. You bring together a lot of interesting ideas that converge into one delicate metaphorical journey.

Second to last line: "blissful"

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Im glad you enjoyed Sarah :)

[Sami Khalil]

A blissful write...Thank you for sharing...:)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you for reading :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Lydia Shutter]

A glorious love poem, Niko....so romantic. Lyid**

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lydii :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lydii :)

[Clara]

This was a delight to read.
One of your best. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Lola for your comment :)

[Clara]

You're most welcome.

[SyberRose]

Enjoyed Nkosana...nicely penned as always...Rose

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Im glad you did Rose :) Thank you

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Im glad you did Rose :) Thank you

[one sky]

A wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing this. Keep writing.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you for reading :)

[NA]

So very beautiful...enjoyed :) x

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you for reading Raven :)

[Prritiy]

Its beautiful love poem, liked it.

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Prritiy for peeking in and reviewing.Hope to see more of you

[Prritiy]

You are welcome,. sure, i will its a pleasure to read and learn :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Sure :) will also be looking foward to your work