IN MY DREAMS

Photo courtesy of Zindi

In my dreams
I see you,
I see your need for me,
But mine is greater.
You stand before me
and i against you
In a warm embrace of our love.
A veil of passion surrounds us vividly painting our gallery perfect memories upon the night sky.
Caught up in bliss we watch as we lie on the velvety emerald fields.
Harmonious symphonies seranading from the heavens drown the obscure quietness of our world.

In my dreams.
The only moment our hearts beat in synchrony,
Illuminating a rainbow of love which so eloquently sears through the haze
magnifying our beauty.
Thus,
I shall compare you to the sun,
Me the moon,
Who unite at eclipse as the earth spins below us in awe.
For in my dreams,
it is you whom i see.

Author's Note

Whats your take?

Reviews

[SleeplessVolcano]

You have expressed wonderful dreams.....

Though the distance between the sun and moon adds a tinge of sadness.....

[linda m. crate]

This is quite lovely in it's romanticism. Very lovely imagery, as well. I like how easily it flowed. Very well done.

[SyberRose]

Your words are so beautiful Nkosana...lovely and romantic piece...Rose:)

[TrimarcoRansome]

This hooked me right in! the imagery is fantastic you create with your words, beautifully penned indeed!

[Lydia Shutter]

Magical and dreamy love poem. Each line flows easily into the next. The celestial references are a nice effect. Filled with passion and well written. Lydi**

[Cassie]

I can already see you are a good writer. Keep going. I love what am reading

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you so much Cassie,will indeed keep doing so :) enjoy your day

[Zachary Willis]

Well done my friend! "You to the sun, me the moon" without you I have nothing to give! True dependence, true passion! Great job!

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Zach.im humbled & i thnk thts my fav line too

[NA]

Really beautifully penned...enjoyed :) x

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

[Legendary_Princess]

Ha me hook the moment I started reading. I love how romantic this is. :D

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Princess glad you enjoyed it :)

[Legendary_Princess]

No problem. :D

[Debbie_Philly]

Very Romantic.... loved it !! :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Thank you Debbie for the kind review.Appreciate it :)