Memories

Everyone has a story,
Deep in their heart.
Glimpses of their Memories,
One can never part.
Souls screaming in the darkness,
But faces will never show,
A past long forgotten;
No one will ever know.

Reviews

[APOORVA]

connect.
a very well expressed one

[Devraj Choudhury]

Thank You. :)

[APOORVA]

welcome,
this is a real good 1

[Devraj Choudhury]

I am glad that you liked my work. :)

[APOORVA]

offcourse! Keep going

[Deadaisycat]

It's very close to having a syllable structure within, since most lines are 5 or 7. If you do a bit of revision and editing I'm sure you could double the sense of power that the poem has.

[Ana B.]

Beautiful glimpse of the past...after all, all we have its memories, without them do we exist? Lovely write :)

[Devraj Choudhury]

Thank you for such lovely words.Appreciated it. :)