Shout Out

I've wandered on this place often -
And everytime I'm held naked with flaws.
Be blinded by the morning promises -
Imprisoned self with callous logic.
And in such frailty, all crumbles again.
Losing track of a masterpiece, resonating -
The pasture I've stumbled my body on.

And while there are no bouquet of roses -
No bells to linger for eternity, yet.
My pledge is not to be an equal,
But to endure this life, standing tall...
Free of man made illusion and tales -
All for the reason my life entails!

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[APOORVA]

And while there are no bouquet of roses -
No bells to linger for eternity, yet.
My pledge is not to be an equal,
But to endure this life, standing tall..


these lines engulfed me totally. what an amazing writing

[Devinked7115]

thank you....

I am,too. =)

[FreedomFighter]

very inslightful piece you have here