Vampire Nation: Blud Chronicles

Any and all feedback is welcomed. However know that this is a spinoff of Vampire Nation, a trilogy of short stories I wrote in Highschool. I will for awhile, be specific on the race of characters for the simple fact that race is important in terms of dealing with a characters lot or position in the story. However as the story goes on, with the audiance learning how the society is structured, I will pull back and let the audiance fill in the blanks about who is what kind of creature. Any criticism will do. Just be honest and go with what you feel.

Updated Note: For the sake of pacing, when I am done with the first story arch, I am going to be restructuring the "book" into smaller sub chapters, or release mutliple books for each story arch.