Vile

Vile

A Poem by Daniel Rodriguez
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A short poem my head has been spinning all day.

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Creek is the sound
The board beneath me betrays
The hunger playfully swells
I look to satisfaction
Noise
My prey loves to make noises
Hide in silence
They try
They fail
Their breathing is like a child's giggle
I take all life.

© 2014 Daniel Rodriguez


Author's Note

Daniel Rodriguez
The monster in that scary thing that gives you nightmares, wanted to go into detail, but the potential epic ness of such a blunt swear on the world felt an appropriate finale.

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Great little poem with a lot of darkness. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on February 16, 2014
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Daniel Rodriguez
Daniel Rodriguez

Phoenix, AZ



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Hello, my name is Daniel Antonio Rodriguez and I am a wannabe writer. I am 27 years old and have been actively writing for the past 12-13 years. I enjoy writing scripts and breaking out into niche gen.. more..

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