Letters/Colors

How are you girl in yellow clothing?

Your smile is beautiful as always

I just couldn't forget your eyes

How they shown kindness towards me

How their green made the whole land around me gray

Beautiful, more than any jewel

Hey...

Please, don't change anymore ok?

Even though you want to be taller

I like you just like this

Even though you say you're not perfect

I think you really are

Because when I was with you

Not a single piece was out of place

Do you remember what I said?

I wanted to be a king

I would become strong and rich

thus, I would be happy

But we laughed together

we smiled together all the time

And I could hold your hand

So... I'm sorry

But I guess I lied

Just because I was with you...

I had everything I always wanted

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How are you boy in red clothing?

Why you always says so many stupid things to me?

You know...

I'll grow and become beautiful!

Then... I won't have to tip-toe to you

So, it's you who can't change anymore

Because I'll remember you how you are

And I want to laugh when I see you surprised

But... even if you change a bit

I'll surely find you again

And if you don't smile when you see me again

I'll never... never forgive you!

Because...

I love you

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Aww, that was such a sweet write. There was something so simple yet so affectionate about this poem that I liked, and I thought that you did a fantastic job in conveying how truly smitten you can be in a relationship. I loved the stanza "Even though you say you're not perfect/I think you really are/Because when I was with you/Not a single piece was out of place"; it pretty much epitomises my relationship right now. :) Great work,
~PaperHearts

[TBird J.]

I enjoyed this, warms the heart :). I love the last part:And if you don't smile when you see me again
I'll never... never forgive you!

Because...



I love you

[MarchAprilMayJuneJuly]

I like your style of writing - it's very droll.
nevertheless i love it :)
continue writing or else risk putting good talent to waste!!

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i Agree with paperhearts. Have you gotten any of the read reviews i sent you for my poems i am guessing no. But i feel in love with this was so cute i simply love this . God bless lily