to taste the words-

 

 

taste the words of your lyrical tongue

seek the words that sought be sung

            

relish the rant of yesterday

embelish with time the so cliche

            

in the most eminent fascination

form the words in sweet translation

                  

seek to mend, evoke, emerge

feel the need to feed the urge

                 

be it ever the truth that conquer desire

an everlasting truth that will require

                      

that urge, that will, consume, devour

mark the date by the hour

           

feast with dreams that dance to the soul

take the floor w/out control

              

dance the path under starlit skies

break the mold to your disguise

        

dance with me within the lines

drawn between our two designs

              

a work in progress, masterpiece...

a sweet release, regard, increase

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Legion]

That second line is off. The rest of the poem is brilliantly done. I like it. Although I would take out all the "w/" bits and actually use the word "with". After all, you are a writer. Use those words well.