be well my muse-

 

spark that urge that inspiration

mark that rush that destination

sing.. breathe..release..overwhelming

scream the songs that make you sing

 

make them crawl on hands and feet

to hear the sound that pounds that beat

reach right in.. rip out their heart

just like you did.. right from the start

 

you do you know..and you know it well

just do what you do and time will tell

and bless the path.. unique..divine

take it times three and then combine

 

and when you do..remember when

over and over..again and again

because... that's how it goes and then again

twist and twirl.. bend and spin

 

reach that point of no return

feel the need of no concern

it's yours you've earned it..don't delay

only yourself you would betray

 

and the essence of the urge that you inspire

brings upon the most ultimate desire

those words, that sound, that complete masterpiece

let go..it's yours..release..increase..

 

be well..my muse..that wicked desire

and then sleep well when you retire

remember me you said you would

w/circumstances..understood

Reviews

[Michael X]

mel, the Passion is really breathtaking, thats how i would have to escribe it,
"be well my muse" a brilliant concept, the meaning is described as a telling,
from two perspectives, first the muse, then the writer, i really liked how the
beginning captures the captivating force of music, the soul's song, conspired
as a design of entrancement, there is a sense of control over your words,
love the rhyme form, the second half shows how the muse possesses the writer,
with its lust for expression, etablishing itself as the divine force
of thought, that which controls the pen, a phenomonal rendering, mike

[Sara Muschweck]

Wonderful write, great eloquence, look forward to reading more from you.

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

beautiful piece... great writing...

[BrightEyes]

oh we do love our muses....even though they can be such fickle things can't they? I loved this piece...you breathe such life and personality into your muse here....and we are, after all, at their mercy aren't we? great flow and rhyming pattern here as well....wonderfully done.

laura

[James K. Blaylock]

This one has an awesome feel and flow. I greatly enjoyed reading it.

[Sheila M]

I really enjoyed this one. I like the flow of it. The way it keeps moving with intensity. Very nice.

[Andromeda]

your rhyming is the perfect touch--great job!