to taste the words-

 

 

 

taste the words of your lyrical tongue

seek the words that sought be sung

            

relish the rant of yesterday

embelish w/time the so cliche

            

in the most eminent fascination

form the words in sweet translation

                  

seek to mend, evoke, emerge

feel the need to feed the urge

                 

be it ever the truth that conquer desire

an everlasting truth that will require

                      

that urge, that will, consume, devour

mark the date by the hour

           

feast w/dreams that dance to the soul

take the floor w/out control

              

dance the path under starlit skies

break the mold to your disguise

        

dance w/me w/in the lines

drawn between our two designs

              

a work in progress, masterpiece...

a sweet release, regard, increase

Reviews

[jusgivit]

I like your style..no I love your style.. Its funny ..i was in the shower this morning..thinking of
how to write a poem..about writing a poem..i swear! thank you..I won't have to bother.. this says it beautifully!!

[David Darabian]

Very well written with a really nice flow. It inspires and makes you want to write more and more and even more. I especially liked the part: in the most eminent fascination, form the words in sweet translation - because that's exactly what I and probably most fiction writers (amateur or pro) try to do; to translate the picture in our mind into words. I have to admit that I usually don't read too much poetry, but I really enjoyed reading yours, well done!

[Legion]

Beautifully done. This definetly caught my attention and then captivated my imagination. :)

[Mariah]

ooh. I love this. The title really caught me. a good title captivates ur readers. here are my favorite lines:

seek to mend, evoke, emerge
feel the need to feed the urge


dance w/me w/in the lines
drawn between our two designs

^^ Kudos, and keep on writing.