Here it comes

Guess what.

As the shadows grow tall,
And the blue turns red,
Here it comes, the calming, balmy evening.

Reviews

[Novram]

Nice imagery of the sunset and moonrise. The time for things that go bump in the night.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much Clif!

[Chris Shaw]

Returned for another read two years down the line. Sunsets are special. When red meets gold you have treasure.

Chris

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this again!

[wuliheron]

Nice, but I do shape poems myself, and without a centered shape its hard for me to read. I can literally see a fractal dragon in shape poems, but this is too short, not centered, and more like Hiku. For example, in Japanese Hiku, Jupiter is a common theme that they might add to such a poem.

[Ruth]

Beautiful - nature is a balm - very lovely and concise piece :)

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahme..]

Uhhhh paints a mental image of dawn. I love it.

[barleygirl]

I love how you personify the coming of evening so we can watch it tiptoe in. I love how you pay attention to how your words sound together: "calming balmy evening" . . . I would prefer to say shadows grow LONG (instead of TALL), but your message is striking the way it is, too! Happy New Year! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Coyote Poetry]

Very good use of words Devansh. You said a handful in so few lines. When night comes. The quiet part of the day is here. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much Coyote for reading and reviewing!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Anushka joshi]

Hello !! So the poem is really deep but
I wanna ask you that do you know about the scientific aspect of blue turning red..
According to Einstein whenever any object in a fast speed moves away it seems red and if it comes towards us , the light reflected by it seems to be blue ...
Until I didn't read your last line I thought that it means the same I wrote so I was confused ... But the last line changed the whole game ... I like that ... please if you get some time please read my new poem ❣❣

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks Anushka! Not too much but being an IIT JEE Advanced qualifier, I studied about it at some point in my preparation. Yes just after studying the doppler effect of sound, I studied about that too. Glad to know you liked my poem. Sorry to say but I'm not active enough to read and review, for some time. So, whenever I get some spare time, I'll try to check it out in the first place :)

[Anushka joshi]

Ohh !! nice I am a NEET aspirant for 2021 . 🤍🤍

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Are you a repeater?

[Anushka joshi]

No , I am currently in my 12th standard from CBSE board

[Pink Pastel]

As the moonlight rises so does dawn sets. I so can relate with this love this poem added some in my review to your poem felt your emotion and it inspired me thank so much love this.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Let me tell you that you made my day :)

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks for the review!

[Pink Pastel]

Your welcome darling have a great day

[Just Kim]

very well written and said

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks Kim! Is your hand good now?