True Friends are a precious gift from God. "A Boy gets lost in a Hallucination, shares his experience and prays for eternal friendship of true friends..."
I liked when you said '...is what the soul in this shell cries' because it's true that our bodies are just shells, vessels they're not who we are, I wouldn't even say they're what we are, because the soul lasts forever, but the body never will.
When you were talking about the relative it would be 'a' not 'an'
I liked this it was sad that the friend wasn't real. I like that idea though.
Sometimes even the best things in life can seem like a mirage. Frieindship gives you a taste of what happiness is, but the realisation that it was just a desire manufactured by our wish for companionship makes it all the more bittersweet. I loved it! :)
This was interesting. I originally thought that you were writing about a love one who had died. I then couldn't tell if this was someone you thought you knew but who turned out to be very different from what you expected or originally thought of them. I like that it is left open for interpretation, it makes the reader think. Best wishes, Laura.
I liked when you said '...is what the soul in this shell cries' because it's true that our bodies are just shells, vessels they're not who we are, I wouldn't even say they're what we are, because the soul lasts forever, but the body never will.
When you were talking about the relative it would be 'a' not 'an'
I liked this it was sad that the friend wasn't real. I like that idea though.
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