THE HALLUCINATION

True Friends are a precious gift from God. "A Boy gets lost in a Hallucination, shares his experience and prays for eternal friendship of true friends..."

Author's Note

Please watch it on YouTube channel 'TSB Worldwide' too :)
https://youtu.be/99OCT8aIM_c

Reviews

[Ghost writer]

I liked when you said '...is what the soul in this shell cries' because it's true that our bodies are just shells, vessels they're not who we are, I wouldn't even say they're what we are, because the soul lasts forever, but the body never will.
When you were talking about the relative it would be 'a' not 'an'
I liked this it was sad that the friend wasn't real. I like that idea though.

[Anjeline]

Interesting lines. Short but are like packets of wisdom.

[LylaCrystal]

Sometimes even the best things in life can seem like a mirage. Frieindship gives you a taste of what happiness is, but the realisation that it was just a desire manufactured by our wish for companionship makes it all the more bittersweet. I loved it! :)

[Laura Kate]

This was interesting. I originally thought that you were writing about a love one who had died. I then couldn't tell if this was someone you thought you knew but who turned out to be very different from what you expected or originally thought of them. I like that it is left open for interpretation, it makes the reader think. Best wishes, Laura.

[Muskan]

I loved it!
hallucinations can make you go through both- heaven ND hell......
Some lines literally went straight to the heart
Keep the good word up!

[kentuck14]

An interesting piece. You no doubt thought long and hard on this subject.
Tom