NEVER GIVE UP

NEVER GIVE UP

A Poem by Devansh Shekhar Shukla
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This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

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Never give up, even if there is
not any way.
Never give up, I think, is a
true say.
You have to follow it,
if you want fame.
You have to follow it,
if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant
says on the land.
Never give up, is what, nomads
say in the sands. 
You have to follow it, if 
you want to do something.
You will surely succeed, 
aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,
your single way is diverged.
Never give up, if in sad thoughts
your heart is submerged.
Never give up, I think is a
true say.
Never give up, it’s
a better way.

© 2019 Devansh Shekhar Shukla


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Devansh Shekhar Shukla
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Excellent motto for success.
you must include a well planned trajectory to the platitude,
and you will always be a winner with this truism.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your review.
Perseverance is the key. You have to stick at something to achieve your goals. I can certainly agree with that Devansh. I like your references to ants and nomads.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much ma'am for your review.
I do agree, we should never give up. what's that quote? Try and fail but never fail to try.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Years Ago

Giving up is nothing but a step in proving that you lost. The better way is to snatch the victory by.. read more
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your review.
Ghost writer

5 Years Ago

you can't fail if you never stop trying, no problem.
Dev,
A good poem and a positive point to be made.
As a suggestion I would change the word "emerge" in the 3rd stanza to "submerged."

Tom

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

5 Years Ago

I appreciate the sincere review and thank you for the suggestion.
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Added on March 14, 2019
Last Updated on March 17, 2019
Tags: Never Give Up, Inspirational, Motivational, Poetry

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Devansh Shekhar Shukla
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

Lucknow, India



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