NEVER GIVE UP

This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

Never give up, even if there is

not any way.

Never give up, I think, is a

true say.

You have to follow it,

if you want fame.

You have to follow it,

if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant

says on the land.

Never give up, is what, nomads

say in the sands. 

You have to follow it, if 

you want to do something.

You will surely succeed, 

aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,

your single way is diverged.

Never give up, if in sad thoughts

your heart is submerged.

Never give up, I think is a

true say.

Never give up, it’s

a better way.

Author's Note

Do you agree?

Reviews

[Carol Cashes]

Had a quick 22.784 minutes and the title caught my eye. I, too, never "give up" but I also understand the difference between "giving up" and walking away, between striving for goals and accepting life's immovable and unshakeable strictures that require (for happiness!) a revision of the dream that doesn't taste like regret. **this is the most 3-or-more-syllable words I have strung together since the last time I was here!**

This, too, is yet another "voice" you have that I don't think I've encountered before and I was pleasantly surprised - by both its brevity and the complete and concise message.

Gotta go...many potential "straws" to dodge today....

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so very much for your beautiful review, Carol.

[barleygirl]

Your message is strongly stated & I agree. It's a universal message that we all need to remember when life gets tough. I just noticed your profile statement: "one of the youngest published authors of the world" . . . I'm sure this is untrue (so many VERY young people doing remarkable things these days) & your claim sounds vain. When you're truly good, you don't need to make false claims. Let your writing sell us on whether being young even matters. Don't put yourself into a box. Defining yourself by your age is a fleeting identity. You are good enuf to trust your writing & know that it's uplifting, it's relatable & it appeals to a wide audience of many ages (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review. I just want to tell you that I didn't write that I am the youngest author. Rather I wrote 'I am one of the youngest published authors'. I published my book, 'DSS-The Enigma' at the age of fourteen.

[barleygirl]

Fourteen isn't very young. Here we have 4-, 5-, & 6-year olds performing brilliantly on TV & I'm sure there are writers that young too. Your age is nothing special when it comes to being talented. Focus on what's REALLY special about YOU!

[Wild Rose]

Well said Devansh

May I also say
Ignore those who will say that "You can not do that"
My answer has always been - 'we will never know if I dont try/have the chance to try'Then go out and prove them worng

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Yes, you are absolutely right!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review.

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Beautifully written and I totally agree with it.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much, Aditi.

[PandaPeaceful]

I completely agree. Beautifully said!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review!

[PandaPeaceful]

Of course!

[Mihika_d]

Very well said and expressed! Loved the poetic effect and imagery!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review!

[Fox]

Well done in breathing some new life into an old saying. And never giving up is what makes life so interesting, even when it actually is hopeless.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing.

[Robert Trakofler]

Very true Devansh, it is a good mantra to have. The process of strive is a most important step. Standing still can be an easy habit to get when the obstacles get to overwhelming. Its is nice to meet you! :)

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so very much. It is nice to meet you too! :)

[gram linski]

good poem , dude, nice flow and go, never give up the dream, it is written in sand, somewhere down the line

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much for your sincere review.