NEVER GIVE UP

This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

Never give up, even if there is

not any way.

Never give up, I think, is a

true say.

You have to follow it,

if you want fame.

You have to follow it,

if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant

says on the land.

Never give up, is what, nomads

say in the sands. 

You have to follow it, if 

you want to do something.

You will surely succeed, 

aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,

your single way is diverged.

Never give up, if in sad thoughts

your heart is submerged.

Never give up, I think is a

true say.

Never give up, it’s

a better way.

Author's Note

Do you agree?

Reviews

[Shoshana]

I couldn't agree more. Really beautiful and motivating poem you got here. Thanks for this wonderful write!
-Shoshana

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot Shoshana!

[Betty Hermelee]

A strong poem on persistence in the face of adversity. I like your choice of words. Nicely penned.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much.

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re welcome!

[John the Baptist]

I do agree. Sound advice here. I believe Mr. Churchill said never, never, never give up.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks for your comment!

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

I definitely agree. These are simple words that are loaded with wisdom. Nice writing!!!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks!

[tiana hernandez]

Beautiful poem, i enjoyed it

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you Tiana

[Muskan]

So it is the first piece of your art that is giving me a glimpse of your writing style
Yeah! I whole heartedly agree that giving up shld never be one's cup of tea.....the ones who sweat are the ones who gain is what I believe
Rhythmic nature has been maintained well but I feel that word choice could b better!
Thank you for a good read

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you for your sincere review!

[Autumn L Gibbs]

I have to agree whole heartedly. So many people give up way to easy. It was a very amazing poem,
A.G.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot, A.G.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Never give-up or give-in to liars and naysayers. I enjoyed your words and thoughts. Thank you Devansh for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much, Coyote.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[BESMASMILE]

Never give up on your poetry! A lovely rendition! Totally agree!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much!

[Autumn L Gibbs]

Your so welcome, Devansh

[wordman]

never give up,never lay down

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review.