NEVER GIVE UP

NEVER GIVE UP

A Poem by Devansh Shekhar Shukla
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This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

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Never give up, even if there is
not any way.
Never give up, I think, is a
true say.
You have to follow it,
if you want fame.
You have to follow it,
if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant
says on the land.
Never give up, is what, nomads
say in the sands. 
You have to follow it, if 
you want to do something.
You will surely succeed, 
aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,
your single way is diverged.
Never give up, if in sad thoughts
your heart is submerged.
Never give up, I think is a
true say.
Never give up, it’s
a better way.

© 2019 Devansh Shekhar Shukla


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Devansh Shekhar Shukla
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If it's worth fighting, yes, NEVER GIVE UP, but if it's not, sometimes the only way to win is to surrender and pick the right battle that is worth fighting for.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Never give up through the hard times because you are learning something new to be gained in your own recovery

Posted 4 Years Ago


I agree

Never give up being you. Never give up because your life adds value to each and every moment,

Posted 4 Years Ago


I can't agree because I almost slit my throat a few years ago and have a scar because of it and I was ready to give up being judged by everyone everywhere I went and I wasn't okay with it because it made me feel upset and like I had to try ignoring it, but there was no ignoring it thanks to these preppy kids and that's why I hate hanging with the girls...

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

That accident was really bad. Sorry if this poem hurt you.
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Never mind scars, even the moon has scars.
Lacey Sue

4 Years Ago

Yes it does
Never do I give up, thank you for sharing your message of hope ;-]

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thank you so very much.
A very positive and inspiring write. I liked it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your review.
Carina Baumert

4 Years Ago

my pleasure
This is so truthful, No one should give up. I really enjoyed this. Awesome!!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!
Phenomenal I love how you worded this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much Lacey :)
I agree on never giving up. Very positive writing. Kudos.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thank you for your sincere comment.
YES! Better to be persistent and try your best! An optimistic poem, well written.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devansh Shekhar Shukla

4 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on March 14, 2019
Last Updated on March 17, 2019
Tags: Never Give Up, Inspirational, Motivational, Poetry

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Devansh Shekhar Shukla
Devansh Shekhar Shukla

Lucknow, India



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