NEVER GIVE UP

This is the third poem from my book 'DSS-The Enigma'. You can watch the video too on the YouTube channel-'TSB Worldwide'.

Never give up, even if there is

not any way.

Never give up, I think, is a

true say.

You have to follow it,

if you want fame.

You have to follow it,

if you want to win the game.

Never give up, is what, an ant

says on the land.

Never give up, is what, nomads

say in the sands. 

You have to follow it, if 

you want to do something.

You will surely succeed, 

aim could be anything.

Never give up, if in many ways,

your single way is diverged.

Never give up, if in sad thoughts

your heart is submerged.

Never give up, I think is a

true say.

Never give up, it’s

a better way.

Author's Note

Do you agree?

Reviews

[Himaya Ka]

If it's worth fighting, yes, NEVER GIVE UP, but if it's not, sometimes the only way to win is to surrender and pick the right battle that is worth fighting for.

[Christopher Ross Living..]

Never give up through the hard times because you are learning something new to be gained in your own recovery

[Christopher Ross Living..]

I agree

Never give up being you. Never give up because your life adds value to each and every moment,

[Lacey Sue]

I can't agree because I almost slit my throat a few years ago and have a scar because of it and I was ready to give up being judged by everyone everywhere I went and I wasn't okay with it because it made me feel upset and like I had to try ignoring it, but there was no ignoring it thanks to these preppy kids and that's why I hate hanging with the girls...

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

That accident was really bad. Sorry if this poem hurt you.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Never mind scars, even the moon has scars.

[Lacey Sue]

Yes it does

[Weeping willow]

Never do I give up, thank you for sharing your message of hope ;-]

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so very much.

[Carina Baumert]

A very positive and inspiring write. I liked it!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you for your review.

[Carina Baumert]

my pleasure

[poetgurl]

This is so truthful, No one should give up. I really enjoyed this. Awesome!!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot!

[Lacey]

Phenomenal I love how you worded this.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much Lacey :)

[Nefertiti Virtudes Ahme..]

I agree on never giving up. Very positive writing. Kudos.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you for your sincere comment.

[Betty Hermelee]

YES! Better to be persistent and try your best! An optimistic poem, well written.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you!