WHEN THE RAIN COMES...

A poem truly for the lovers of rainfall. It is the fourth poem from my first book 'DSS-The Enigma'. Watch the video- youtube.com/c/theshekharbrothers

When the rain comes,

it brings a chuckle on everyone’s face.

When I enjoy it,

it feels like it’s the end of my bad days.

All people seem to be pleased

as they forget all their pain.

“What is the best thing ever?”

I think it’s a shower of rain.

All flowers turn into their best ever look,

picnics are planned among friends.

When it rains in the sands,

it’s just like a new life to the weary bands.

Sometime, somewhere, someone had asked me,

“How many types of people are there?”

I answered-“Those who have enjoyed 

rain and those who have never”.

Reviews

[Jane]

and the best thing about rain
is its tapping
on
the
glass
forever-
or the sharing
of an
um
bre
lla

the taste of an edge
between dry, and wet
can surely trick us all
into merry .

death

[Pennywriter]

An ode to the rain! You made my day...

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much.

[Betty Hermelee]

How to enjoy the rain!! I like it!!! and it brings new life as well. If you haven't tried it, do so. nice poem, very upbeat!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot!!!

[John the Baptist]

Indeed, at the end of a scorching hot, humid day, the cleansing and cooling of a summer rainstorm is most welcome.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks for your review!

[Sawdust]

Great write. Tells about a unique privilege given to us by almighty

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much...

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

so true, as i child and a young teen even i would stand out in the rain and just get drenched with my head up to the sky. My mum would have to call me in she thought me stupid i suppose.
I love the rain.
yes love your poem too good luck in my comp!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much.

[Mihika_d]

You have described the rains in it's best form. Rains being smile on numerous faces and liveliness to nature's creation. Your selection of the subject for poem is quite simple but it's description by you is exceptional!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much for your kind words.

[Vatsal Rohilla]

Rain is indeed a pleasant experience. I think you've done a good job, I am especially impressed by the ending.

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your sincere review!

[wordman]

gods life blood for his creation,i love thunder storms in the summer

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your review.

[wordman]

your`re welcome

[Aditi Nagvanshi]

Let it fall!
Let it Rain!
Let those showers wash away that pain!
It's just feels like a new beginning. A new path on which we have to move on.
Really loved this one!!

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thank you so much for your review!

[barleygirl]

My favorite part is the last stanza . . . a clever & playful way to bring attention to how loving rain or not loving rain is the dividing line (in your opinion)! For a poem about rain, you could have added more sensory details to appeal to all the senses. Rain is such a sensory thing, but you stay more in your head, being analytical, saying how it FEELS INSIDE more than how it feels & sounds & tastes on the outside. I wonder if you aren't too focused on rhyming, and does this distract you from delivering a more powerful point? I really love your writing becuz of your youthful spirit. I feel your writing is appropriate for your age, but if you could dig a little deeper into each message, it could develop your writing maturity. Message should always come first, then think about frilly stuff like rhyming. Thanks for sharing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Devansh Shekhar Shukla]

Thanks a lot for your sincere review and suggestions.