Romance with life

Romance with life

A Poem by D Kamdar
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To all the mates, who devote their life to some purpose. Start living for yourself, live full!Romance with lifr

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Experience each day and take a note of it,
Play the game amd try not to win but learn,
Try not to love the related,but to love your self,
Smell the beauty of this life instead of faults in others.

Prick not the last pages of you book, but prick the distractions you go through,
Spray not the perfume, but your inner fragrance everywhere,
Laugh not at others,but try laughing at yourself.

Earn assets later,it's time to earn values,
Money can certainly not buy them.
Build your empire later,it's time to build a you,
Enjoy each day to the fullest,and live for yourself selflessly.

Try running,walking,rising,falling but never
try stopping,
Let the flow go on,destiny will do the rest
Do the undone,and make your own trail,
Live for yourself and gain satisfaction.
For the time will come again and again,but you live only once
And this is the chance. Chance to grow,explore,learn,win,know and love.

Experience each bit of your life;
Uncertainity is what we hear about life,
But what we have around is so certain
Ascertain that for you! Time to live!
Time to love! Time to be selfish.

© 2016 D Kamdar


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This is wonderful! I could tell you had freed yourself up and wrote what you really felt. Your poem has some good messages, mixed in with beautiful language like "Prick not the last pages of your book." Well done, this is a beautiful poem and I am excited to see more. I was surprised by your last line, but I think that was the point, and it leaves the reader thinking and questioning. If it was a mistake and you meant to say selfless, it works either way. Good job, you have the makings of a wonderful poet, so keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D Kamdar

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your concern and thankyou for the advice! Am trying to write more non rhyming ones! And t.. read more



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Creative, deep and thoroughly engaging, it's full of energy and spirit. I feel every bit of what you wrote and wish I could take the same emotion to heart myself. XxXx

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is wonderful! I could tell you had freed yourself up and wrote what you really felt. Your poem has some good messages, mixed in with beautiful language like "Prick not the last pages of your book." Well done, this is a beautiful poem and I am excited to see more. I was surprised by your last line, but I think that was the point, and it leaves the reader thinking and questioning. If it was a mistake and you meant to say selfless, it works either way. Good job, you have the makings of a wonderful poet, so keep it up! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

D Kamdar

8 Years Ago

Appreciate your concern and thankyou for the advice! Am trying to write more non rhyming ones! And t.. read more

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D Kamdar
D Kamdar

Ahmedabad, Gujarat, India



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I am a 16 year old from India. I'm very passionate about all my likings especially my life more..

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