Try

Don't want to give it away so just read and enjoy!

One's mind is an open book...but only to selected readers

One's life can be shared with the world...but only to those that are believers

One's love could be presented as a gift to someone who's never felt...but one's trust could be broken by someone who's inner demons were never helped

In order to move on one has to have courage to try again...

But in order to gain courage one must truely believe it's possible to win.

Reviews

[Dayran]

You're having a great start here at WC. Its not unusual feeling a little woozy about bring it all out. In fact you don't want people to think you're starting a fire just to put it out yourself. Pace your writing with what you do on a daily basis, as a start and see how it works out.

Anybody can hack down a forest but it takes a lot to construct something you will be happy with. Work with it and try to hear ' its ' own suggestions. I like the constructive theme of the poems you have written so far.

[Devon Posley]

You sent me this almost a year ago and I just thought I should let you know that is exactly what I've done. For this long hiatus from writers cafe I have explored various fields of writing which include playwriting, journalism, and short stories, etc.. all with the thought of rediscovering myself as a write. This was a great piece of advice you gave me and I would just like to say thank you.

[Dayran]

You're welcome. Welcome back.

[Ben Taylor]

Hm, nice.
The last two lines seemed very genuine, and they also rhymed, which I respect--oftentimes rhymed lines seem stilted and awkward.
Well done.

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Devon,

Again an interesting poem. Lots of ideas flowing to and fro. Lots of food for thought.

Best regards,

Rick

[Rhea752]

confidence is very important in life. great job with incorporating this important message to the readers.

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Welcome to WC Devon :) I love the message of this work :) It's wonderful!

[Abbie]

beautiful, well written poem, I like it. in order to succeed, you have to try. you are a good poet, keep it up!

[♥ Lexii Boo &hea..]

Beautifully written, loved it and this is now my new favorite thanks for sharing :D

[Dr. Wood ?]

confidence is everything...I liked this

[quixotic_rose]

On some strange level I enjoyed this :) its all rhyming and to me its upbeat in a happy way and its all about that zest! Thanks for being awesome and writing this :D