The day I meet you.

The day when I meet you
will be indescribable,
it will be like the earth
has suddenly opened
and pulled me into itself,
the suffocating feeling,
the addictiveness
will be unimaginable
I will be crushed
with the weight of it,
the feeling of the sun
on the coldest day in winter,
bathing
drowning,
savour it
it will disappear, the earth,
the sun, the suffocating
everything
and suddenly
your gone
and I go.

Reviews

[tHe]

Full of depth and powerful words. i enjoyed it all. thankyou

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with great potential. I like the desire and emotion in the poem. The description made the feeling of the poem come alive. a very good poem.
Coyote