Just Perfect

Just Perfect

A Poem by Odette

It was pretty perfect between us
the natural conection
i was waiting for the moment
out of movies where it happens just perfect
but it didnt
you changed
maybe i did too
who knows
and I always wonder
what could have been

© 2011 Odette


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Odette
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Tender yet sad, very good.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life can easily get twisted. I like this story. Hard to hold on to perfection. It is hard work to maintain a love and be content. A sad ending to a strong poem. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 3, 2011
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