A Boy

A Boy

A Poem by Odette

she sits
her hand shakes
her reactions are slow
but she is affected
he effects her like a disease
she shuts her eyes
breathe breathe
and opens them again
and looks at him
but only for a second
because if she looks to long it hurts too much
his laughis short
but his smile is the most important thing
don't stare dont stare
she tries to look anywhere but at him
then finally she gives up and just stares and imagines

© 2011 Odette


Author's Note

Odette
Ignore grammer and punctuation please, what do you think of the dialogue?

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i can relate, awesome poem!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on January 3, 2011
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