This haiku has a title a fair bit longer then the actuall haiku itself, which is comparitavely small

This haiku has a title a fair bit longer then the actuall haiku itself, which is comparitavely small

A Poem by Detective Watts
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For a competition.

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I wrote a haiku

About writing some haiku

Or is it haikus?

© 2010 Detective Watts


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Detective Watts
@ Matt Best. Review. Ever. The first sentence is about the review itself. It reminds me of my title.

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sometimes it's good to be a hamm:) to fun made be smile

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is a critique
You did a fine job, good sir
Keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago


great job
Love this kind of stuff
makes me laugh

Posted 13 Years Ago


Never thought all my critique would deal with the title of a piece. I just want to point out that actuall should be "actual" and comparitavely, "comparatively."

I liked this. I'm a fan of this kind of post-modern/self-aware style of writing.

Now, what would have been really interesting is if the title had been equally as long as the haiku (syllable-wise).

Also, it's "haiku," but I get the feeling you know this by now. Good stuff.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 28, 2010
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