I Miss You

I Miss You

A Poem by Detective Watts

You haven't really seen me
for a little over three
years in which I thought of you
every single day.

I doubt that you remember me
but even if you do
you never really liked me
not like I like you.

Untill i get the courage
and until we finally meet
and you have no other
whom you'd rather keep.

'Till then I'll stay away from you
and you'll stay close to him
I hope it turns out well for you
and my life stays this grim.

While I want to be with you
It's better if you don't
even ever know it
because I know you won't.

© 2010 Detective Watts


Author's Note

Detective Watts
Autobiographical. I hate my love life. At least Jodie Foster knows who John Hinckley Jr. is. Named after a picture on her deviant art account. I spend altogether to much time on there.

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Ron
The reason I like this work is because I can identify so much of it in real life. The yearning male hoping that he will somehow attract the girl he desires by pure inertia! Stays in the background, may timidly fly the odd flag, just hopes and prays that one day she will chose him and NOT the Cad she seems attracted to. My experience would state; by adopting this approach you always lose. What is worse years later when you talk again to the girl (Now unhappily married to the Cad) she berates you for doing exactly nothing! Good stuff Mr Watts.

Posted 14 Years Ago


How terribly sad. Nice flow and emotional vocabulary.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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