Sweet Darkness

Sweet Darkness

 

Ah my sweet

You look good

Probably taste even better

Those eyes

Those dark dark eyes

When you look at me

I feel you look through me

Into my deepest core

Reading every flaw

Every scratch

I’m not in mint condition

I hope you don’t mind

You can patch me up if you’d like

But reward me with a taste

Your sweet sweet taste

I’m so tempted

You’re like a forbidden fruit

I shouldn’t

But I must

I’m so tired of resisting

Let me give into you

Get lost in you

Devour you

I want to rape you

With my eyes

Up and down

Constantly

And you can’t escape it

You don’t want to

You’re enjoying the attention

But if you’re enjoying it

Is it rape?

I don’t know

But I do know

I want to taste

Your sweetness

And drown

In your darkness

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is relatable to some people! That is true, it isn't considered rape if the person actually likes it! Ha.
Nice work, like always!:)



Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[Kes]

Haha, I really like this! Although I've only ever been on the recieving end of what this describes - being loveless creature that I am. lol
Great work, as always.
K

[zainul]

You are so candid !
Lovely work.

[w]

This has wonderful potential. I believe adding breaks (stanzas) and punctuation will make this good piece become phenomenal.

[J. Anthony Guerrero]

Definitely a nice piece. Very relateable for a lot of people too I'm sure! We've all either done that with our eyes or been on the receiving end of it. Great to see it in a poem!

[khalid]

i like it.t is really like eyes love making lol..very nice