Changing You

Changing You

 

You wanna fill me in

On what I am

To you

To everyone

You come and go

As you please

Expecting me not to change

Well surely

You know

Everything in life changes

Nothing ever stays the same

It’s like a flicker

Of a candle

The flames shape always shifts

And changes

Damn

You don’t know me

You have no idea

Not one clue

Stop assuming

Always guessing

I’m bored with you

And your words

No punctuation

So many spelling mistakes

If I were to correct you

I’d be here forever

And I don’t have forever

To waste on you

Fix your own grammatical errors

I tire of our meaningless conversations

Where hormones take over

We’re not teenagers

We’re adults

Start acting like one

I tire of children

Hell

I tire

Of

You

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

I enjoyed this. I like your references to life and the flicker of a flame.

[The Flame of the Knight]

Wow. I really like how you took the spiteful path on here. If this is real, then its good that you ditched him, because he didnt make you happy. I like the poem. I look foreward to reading more of your work.

[MoriartyMesa]

Little editing needed, some restructuring, seeing where you are going and it works. Just minor fixes.