Changing You

Changing You

 

You wanna fill me in

On what I am

To you

To everyone

You come and go

As you please

Expecting me not to change

Well surely

You know

Everything in life changes

Nothing ever stays the same

It’s like a flicker

Of a candle

The flames shape always shifts

And changes

Damn

You don’t know me

You have no idea

Not one clue

Stop assuming

Always guessing

I’m bored with you

And your words

No punctuation

So many spelling mistakes

If I were to correct you

I’d be here forever

And I don’t have forever

To waste on you

Fix your own grammatical errors

I tire of our meaningless conversations

Where hormones take over

We’re not teenagers

We’re adults

Start acting like one

I tire of children

Hell

I tire

Of

You

Reviews

[LittleLover]

I like this part a lot
"I tire of children
Hell
I tire
Of
You"
Great flow, i like it a lot :) Great job, its got emotion, and a good flow, rating 100/100 :)

[Destinyxi]

Thank you so much! haha :D

[LittleLover]

No problem :D haha

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and directness of the poem. People will come to a point where they must decide what they want.
"We’re not teenagers
We’re adults
Start acting like one"
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Monica]

This has great flow, as all of your poems do...it is also full of heartfelt emotions, frustration, honesty.

"You don’t know me
You have no idea
Not one clue
Stop assuming
Always guessing
I’m bored with you
And your words"

...I absolutely love the way you tell him how you're over him.
the last few lines...I imagine you throwing your hands up, turning, and walking away while calmly saying "Hell, I tire, of, you"...as if you are exhausted by his childlike behavior.

Well done! Keep writing :)

[Johnny Joe]

your writing and poetry is very inner reflective... its beautiful, truly

[GunMetal]

I can feel the frustration here. It's practically growling.

[khalid]

i cant imagine how the person you have written this for is feeling when reading this? i would kill myself if my love says such things to me! you have written it in a very angry way so it sounds very nice according to the feeling you had

[The Jay]

Stern yet amusing. Shrewdly written.

[LuthienThalia]

I like it. The style is choppy, but you convey your message clearly.

[Luciole]

oh wow this is amazing!! Amazing job :))

[Kes]

Strong and smart. I like it. :)
Thanks for sharing.
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