Just Go

Just Go

 

Why cant you just

Get off my mind

Leave my thoughts

Walk out of them

Step away from my world

You’re always interfering

With my imagination

Always walking into

The bubble of my thoughts

And dancing around

Smiling at me

Making me feel like

Such a fool

Why cant you just

Let me be

For once

Leave me alone

Get away from me

I tire of this

I tire of these thoughts

Of these what ifs

I tire of you

I don’t need you

Constantly coming around

And having me question

Every

Little

Thing

When just yesterday

I was so damn sure

Just go

It’s been months

Just go

Why cant you

Just

Go

Reviews

[LittleLover]

Had the same feeling before, kinda sucks :/ Its goes away after a time, trust me, it gets better :) Good poem by the way, i liked it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Not easy to release good memories. The mind and heart will always battle looking for a inch of hope. I like the flow of thoughts and the strong ending. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emrick]

He cant go coz you love him.he will stop interfering wit your thoughts the day you will decide u really want him off ur mind.

[Heather]

wooow i've always had the same thought and in your poem, its well expressed :)

[......]

wow you tell it, i wish i could say this to someone , emotional read love it

[Katie Flores]

hmmm... I like it :)! the only thing it that it seems a bit wordy, maybe if you tried to condense it or synthesis it i think it would help bring more force into the poem. but great write :D

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, I think you just expressed words to how I use to feel about a certain situation I went through. Bravo! I totally can relate to this. I love the anger in this. It's how I felt wanting the person to just go from my thoughts and quit interferring with my life period. You done such a great job on this for sure!:) Keep up the good work.


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[Johnny Joe]

i really like this one

[Tasha]

It's hard to get someone out of your mind, I felt your emotions. Wonderful write.

This is really good, so emotional and tugs.