Miles of Memories

Written today about my ex.

Miles of Memories

 

You want to

Get out of here

Get away from me

Get away from

The memories

Our past

But putting miles

Between us

Won’t change

How you feel

What happened

What was said

And done

I will still

Find my way

In your heart

And on your mind

I will be

Every breath

That leaves

Your body

Everything

You touch

Will feel like

Me

Everything you see

Will remind you

Of me

I wish you

The best

Of luck

In your new world

But the old

The past

Will always

Always

Finds its way

Back to you

Author's Note

If you liked it, please let me know :)

Reviews

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

So much...deep inside the mind and the heart. I like the way you used the words in this poem......Keep it up :-)

[Marie]

A good way of sayinig good by. The past always catches up doesn't it?

[Distant horizons]

Beautifully captured. You can't run away from memories and the feelings they bring.

[khalid]

yes! i really liked it and enjoyed reading it. i liked the way you are chalenging and insisting on your love and your confidence of it. i like the simplicity of the words you have picked because it really suits the subject of the poem. in short, thank you for such great nice work, keep on

[DJKRach]

Some might wonder why this is written this way; and whether you meant to write it this way or not, I interpreted this as the difficulty that saying a lot of these things have. Kind of like, when you're holding back tears. I found that very intriguing. Well written.