No Words

No Words

I don’t feel the need

To write down how I feel

What I think

My experiences

My turmoil

My laughter and my tears

I live them

And I breathe them

And I do it all with you

I lack written words

Because I speak them

I put them into actions

And the words are played

There is no pausing

Going back and correcting

Spell check and grammar correction

If I make mistakes

Then they are made

And I can’t go back to fix them

But that’s alright

Because you bare with me

Your patience and kindness

Understanding and support

God, who needs words anymore

When I play out everything I’ve ever written

In my own real life storybook

With just me and you

My emotions

My turmoil

My laughter and my tears

And you

You of course

Reviews

[Vol]

The best people ARE the poem... Farmers. police, cowboys, soldiers... and all the others who are ALIVE all the time... we write about them when we can't be them.

[Chris]

A poet in life... I like that one.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Beautiful & very touchy. Wishing a lots of bliss & blessing for you & off course your love!

[Blogger]

This sounds very professionally done. Very nice. And blue is now my favorite color! lol

[Destinyxi]

Thank you. Why is blue now your favorite color? I don't remember mentioning blue in my poem haha.

[Blogger]

Seriously? Take another look at this beautiful write. You must see color.... I sure did. :0)

[Destinyxi]

I suppose you're right :)

[Blogger]

in the picture! LOL You look terrific

[Destinyxi]

I had a feeling you were talking about my dress haha!

[John Stussy]

I like this poem, the overall eloquence of it lies in its very simplicity, which undertones the absence of the necessity for words, or namely, writing a fantasy when you've already got a damned good one. Excellent piece of writing, it's great seeing new work from you.

[Destinyxi]

Haha thanks a lot Johnny boy :) It's great to see you're still on this site!

[sakshi arora]

with some great lines in between it is average at many places but i like the effort :)

[Destinyxi]

I write simple words and lines for everyone to understand :P Thanks for your review!

[sakshi arora]

ur welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Words have value when we use them for good.
"My emotions
My turmoil
My laughter and my tears
And you
You of course"
The above lines are perfect. Led the reader to a perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

thanks a bunch coyote! I'm glad you liked my poem and I appreciate you constantly reviewing my work :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome and it is my pleasure.

[A. Amos]

Simply brilliant piece of writing, need to have some free time to spend a day on your page to read from your work. This was mesmerizing my friend.

[Destinyxi]

Thanks so much. I hope you do have some free time soon and go through my work, it hasn't been getting much attention from anyone including myself haha.

[A. Amos]

Sure will do and you're most welcome...

[B-poet]

This is a very raw, blunt, candid & articulate write wrapped all into one. The sincerity of it though is what makes this a special & engaging read. Great work Destinyxi. Enjoyed it from start to finish. :)

[Destinyxi]

Thanks a lot Bpoet, and thanks for always reviewing my work even when it takes me months to write new things. I appreciate it :)