Creamy Eyes

Creamy Eyes

 

What happens if I want to possess you

Can I contain you?

How easily can you be hidden?

Would you follow the orders I give you

Would you do all that I ask of you

From you

 

If I could keep you to myself

I wouldn’t hesitate to do so

I want you

I want to own you

Ever single part of you

Any part you can come up with

I want it

 

Would you submit to me

Let me take you over

Dominate you

Would you call me what I want you to

Calling me by a name of power

 

Would you embrace all the strength

I’d have over you

Or would you fight it?

 

I keep what is mine

And you

My little boy

Are nothing but mine

 

I want to see you writhe

Every time you go against your instinct

And I want to see what it looks like

When recognition forms in your beautiful brown eyes

Knowing just who’s stronger

And knowing who’s helpless

 

What are your limits

How long can you last

And how long can you keep me interested

By doing everything I tell you to

 

And not

Defying

Denying

Objecting

Challenging

Me

 

Once

 

My beautiful dark eyed boy

 

Let’s get started 

Author's Note

A little mix my Italian blood, a little mix of fifty shades of grey, and a little mix of generally wanting control. This is what I came up with, and this is what came to mind.

I had to write something out before I buried myself in homework once more.

Enjoy it! and ladies check out the picture :P

Reviews

[B-poet]

Sounds like a lot of dominating thoughts have come to the surface in poetic form. A very interesting and intriguing poem. Nice job. :)

[Destinyxi]

thank you

[Invisible]

some men are easy to control, others are but aren't willing to see it, but every man is only as he allows himself to be, around a woman.

[Destinyxi]

very true, thanks for your review

[Invisible]

you're welcome young lady.

[Jibey]

Captures well that mood that many women have.. and that many men enjoy...

[Destinyxi]

thank you :)

[J. F. Charleston]

It's good. If you had complete control than it would be very boring after a while, but its me. A good write and thanks for the rr

[Destinyxi]

You're welcome, thanks for reviewing

[Baby Ricochet]

I'm not really the submissive type. Good poem Destinyxi

[Destinyxi]

Thank you Baby

[lee von cleef]

the challenge ... now stare.

[Destinyxi]

lol :P

[Joe]

Yeah Love It!
I'm A Prancing Tiger And Dragon Mixed!
But Yes For The Right Woman! Who Wouldn't Be A Little Kitten! :)

My Fav Lines:

"I keep what is mine
And you
My little boy
Are nothing but mine" / Love It! Grrrrr :) LOL

Great Passionate And Sexy Write Dest! :)
Grrreatly Enjoyed:)

Yours Truly!
'Little Boy' LOL :)

[Destinyxi]

hahahaha, glad you liked the poem!

[Hippy]

erotica? Interesting! definitely pushing the pg boundaries on writerscafe. Bravo! I enjoyed this, quite erotic. Pushes boundaries, like 50 shades, and it also captures like a bite, a desire,something human and sexual. I feel society and media paint an image of what is sex, human desire, and how it should look, well when you are there it isn't exactly like that, it is raw, expressive, and kinda rough. So have fun with whatever floats your boat (in a safe/loving environment) you have a body, use it explore all your pleasures. try most anything twice (make sure you didn't like it). Anyway this reminds me that i need to finish my poem about sex and human desire i started earlier, kinda how we all want fucked like s***s, but it is complicated. Anyway this helped rekindle a flame that i had earlier so thanks for the inspiration. I'mma stop rambling now. umm good job, needs punctuation, like it starts with it but you stop altogether like 2nd stanza.

[Destinyxi]

I used to not use any punctuation in my old poetry. I purposely don't use it all the time :P

Thank you so much for your review

[Hippy]

yeah i didn't use to use it either, i just feel it helps with phrasing sometimes. so maybe all or nothing then cause it threw me off a bit haha. but whatever f**k me don't let me tell you how to make your poetry. Anyway i am here to throw my imput around hoping someone will either learn something or laugh. You are welcome for the review. stay gold

[Destinyxi]

The outsiders :P

[Hippy]

Haha, Yeah i been in a phase of telling people that. Just stay like gold enough for you, not ponyboy gold.

[Destinyxi]

haha, sounds good :P One of my buddies tells me to stay gold all the time.

[Hippy]

wow small world. Well if your friend believes it and an internet stranger tells you then there must be something to it. Like there are no coincidences in life.

[Destinyxi]

true :P

[gombeggar]

sounds tantalizing to be under yer thumb...but not gonna go there ;) ...good write, well written too, the inner workings of a wanton girl's mind

[Destinyxi]

psh, it might be good for you to go there. who knows, might learn some things about yourself. Thanks for your review :P

[gombeggar]

it might be good indeed...time will tell, girl...it alwas does ;) remember i am not my avitar ;) ...anyways keep writing u do such good work

[Destinyxi]

Haha, many people on here don't have them as their avatar, not to worry :P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Very much the dominatrix at work here. At least no demure attentive lover more a demanding and a little belittling for one so set on winning him. Risky strategy set out here.

[Destinyxi]

haha, mhm. thanks for your review