Creamy Eyes

Creamy Eyes

 

What happens if I want to possess you

Can I contain you?

How easily can you be hidden?

Would you follow the orders I give you

Would you do all that I ask of you

From you

 

If I could keep you to myself

I wouldn’t hesitate to do so

I want you

I want to own you

Ever single part of you

Any part you can come up with

I want it

 

Would you submit to me

Let me take you over

Dominate you

Would you call me what I want you to

Calling me by a name of power

 

Would you embrace all the strength

I’d have over you

Or would you fight it?

 

I keep what is mine

And you

My little boy

Are nothing but mine

 

I want to see you writhe

Every time you go against your instinct

And I want to see what it looks like

When recognition forms in your beautiful brown eyes

Knowing just who’s stronger

And knowing who’s helpless

 

What are your limits

How long can you last

And how long can you keep me interested

By doing everything I tell you to

 

And not

Defying

Denying

Objecting

Challenging

Me

 

Once

 

My beautiful dark eyed boy

 

Let’s get started 

Author's Note

A little mix my Italian blood, a little mix of fifty shades of grey, and a little mix of generally wanting control. This is what I came up with, and this is what came to mind.

I had to write something out before I buried myself in homework once more.

Enjoy it! and ladies check out the picture :P

Reviews

[Corset]

This makes me want to run out and buy whips and chains, paint a bulls eye on the head board tie someone to it and play darts. good job, I am now released into the general public. I'll point at you :P

[The 13th Eros]

Sensuality unleashed in more than fifty shades. What a powerful craving for caressing the boundaries, and setting fire to the rain.

[Hester Vane]

Sexy Pictures :-)! Anway, once again, a great poem! You never dissapoint

[Destinyxi]

haha thanks Hester :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I have to admit this poem brought a smile to my face more and more as you were righting. I have a dominant streak when it comes to play but I also don't mind being submissive if I feel like the person has a strong enough personality. I loved this poem though. It made me happy inside.

[Destinyxi]

haha I'm so glad. Thanks for reviewing!

[kublakhan27]

I had a huge smirk on my face as I made my way through this, perhaps because it's been a while since you've served up something like this and I had to get reacquainted with Kels the dominatrix haha As always, you leave little to the imagination, but I like it that way...viva Italiana ;)

[Destinyxi]

Haha, I would have paid to see that smirk :P

Felt good to write a poem like this. Thanks for reviewing mr.smarty

[kublakhan27]

Haha yeah you would have been amused ;P Hope you get a chance to write more soon...I'll be here to read them *hugs* :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like when the woman know what she desired. Allowed the man to fall into real paradise. Powerful description led reader to good thoughts and places. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Thanks for reviewing Coyote

[KAOlmsted]

Meh, he's a little shaggy for my taste *laugh* but I can appreciate he is a handsome devil ;-) I think when we get exactly what we think we want without challenge the novelty wears off with a quickness. No fun in a boy who will roll over and obey, not for a woman who enjoys the hunt, anyway. Still...damn fine write. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.

[Destinyxi]

I love his hair :P Long hair on men gives you something to pull ;)

Thank you for reviewing!

[KAOlmsted]

;-)

Always my pleasure.

[Frieda P]

You little vixen dominatrix you!

Good one, must be that hot little Italian in you! Kudos. ;-)

[Destinyxi]

hahaha, thanks Frieda ;)