Bowing Down

Bowing Down

 

God must have pulled some strings

When he made a man like you

Tall dark and handsome

 

You think he would approve

If I were to worship your broad shoulders

You think he would mind

If I were to memorise every bump and dent of your abs

 

You have these eyes that girls would kill for

And this smile that catches everyone’s attention

But it’s what they can’t see, that’s so close to perfect

 

Under those clothes, you have this sculpted body

I can’t help running my hands over

Having my tongue and my teeth scrape over

 

My hands do something to you

But they don’t get the reaction I want

It’s when I use my full lips and wicked tongue

That you start humming in delight

 

The music that comes out of you

It takes every ounce of my strength

To continue what I’m doing

And not straddle you like a horse

And ride till your legs give in

 

When I get you alone

Oh, when I get you alone

It’ll be you

Screaming to the Gods

Asking if he approves of my actions

Asking if what you feel is normal

 

The pleasure

 

At that point, my baby

I wouldn’t care about any God

 

I’d be worshipping you

No one else

Author's Note

I've had a few people ask me to get cracking on a new erotic piece, this one isn't too erotic and blunt so it's rated Teen. If anyone thinks it should be rated otherwise then let me know.

I'm sure many women will have a man come to mind when reading this poem haha

Enjoy!

Reviews

[Christopher Booyakasha]

very nice piece. i like it.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you

[kublakhan27]

That's more like it, my dear ;)

[Destinyxi]

haha yeah

[Ahmad Cox]

Nice and sensual and I love the build up of the poem till the end.

[Destinyxi]

Thank you :D

[Ahmad Cox]

No problem. Even though I write mostly about nature and and spiritual things I am very sensual myself by nature so I always appreciate a nice good sensual piece done well. I actually have some poems you might appreciate. I will send them in a RR. Let me know what you think when you get around to reading them.

[Destinyxi]

my RR are closed, link them in a message and I'll get to them as soon as I can

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A good writer can write erotic without deep description. You did. Nice to tip-toe into passion allowing the reader to use their imagination. No weakness in the poem. I like to hear the woman point of view. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Destinyxi]

Thank you Coyote

[KAOlmsted]

Tall, dark and handsome...I like mine big, blond, and trainable ;-) Well done, this. Hope you're feeling better. If this is any indication, you are :-D

[Destinyxi]

I'm not into blondes really haha. Cept Brad Pitt ;) Thanks for reviewing Kimmer!

[KAOlmsted]

Ha! Always my pleasure ;-)

[Frieda P]

Woooo ride em cowgirl! Hot and spicy... straightforward and did I say hot? Good one! :-)

[Destinyxi]

hahaha, thanks Frieda! :P

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was all mine, I assure you. ;-P